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    Smile service (more new)

    hi.

    Everybady thanks.


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    Re: service (more new)

    Originally posted by hashusdin
    hi.

    Everybady thanks.


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    kitty ate Otacons kitty! veljko's Avatar
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    the image looks cool- i see some changes that defenitly made the difference-
    i have one remark thoug-
    i think the scene lacks shadows- This imho gives it an overburnt feel.
    i would defently make the shadows a bit stronger

    hope this helps!
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    Maybe a arealight would make small dark shadows around the napkins etc. Then it would look more realistic.

    It is a really good scene with good models, but the lighting needs improvement.
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    Re: service (more new)

    Originally posted by hashusdin
    hi.

    (sory, I know a little english)

    Everybady thanks.

    render time 2 hours.
    area light.

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    Last edited by hashusdin; 08-05-2004 at 06:33 AM.

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    Re: Re: service (more new)

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    how about posting in JUST the WIP forum, until you're, I don't know, maybe finished?
    I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence

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    I would lose the wood panel Background somehow. Perhaps an off-white wall with either darker wood vertical stripes. The lack of negative space in the image makes your eye travel all over the place.

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    Originally posted by Zarathustra
    how about posting in JUST the WIP forum, until you're, I don't know, maybe finished?
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    I like the 3rd one the best. but to me the one that looks the most real would have to be the second
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    fwiw I wwould keep the wood wall and lose the wood table



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    Man, I REALLY wish you'd figure out which forum to post in.

    Those napkins wouldn't cast such harsh shadows. You can either make them translucent or try this trick:
    Make your light exclude the napkins
    Clone your light 3 times
    First clone change to exclude everything but the napkins, shadows off
    Second make low, like 15% or less with shadows on
    Third make negative of second (ie. - if second is 15%, make third -15%), shadows off

    Now you'll have a weaker shadow for the napkins. So try that and also try posting in the right forum (ie - post in Work in Progress since this is a work in progress). No one's gonna ever hire you if you can't follow simple directions.
    I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence

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    Talking Re: service (more new)

    Originally posted by hashusdin
    hi.

    (sory, I know a little english)

    new napkins (shadow-suface-bump)


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