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    Swing

    Here is my render I did today. It's not perfect but who of us are? I first loaded in two object files from Daz Studio. When I look at the surfaces I noticed that only the color surface came through. No Bump map or normal map. So I totally redid the surfaces of my female character. I probably should rework this.
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    The woman seems out of focus, or is that just blurring from the noise filter? You also need to work on her stockings because there's too much noise there. Keep going!

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    Here is the new render of the same name. I changed the surfaces and took of the blur to the photo.
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    It looks much better, but I think you overshoot the postproduction.

    Now the image is kind of flat, I think it would be good to leave the PS work and focus on nice lighting and composition, to create the mood. Some background, elements with DOF closer to the camera. I don't know what effect you are aiming for though.
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    I reworked the postwork
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