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    SHORT FILM- Old but Lightwave

    http://www.youtube.com/user/silvioto.../7/4mWwQPXFJMs

    To the ones that did't see my short...

    A bit Older. A little instable motions.

    But comment the film itself please.
    Silvio Toledo
    Brazil

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    i'd like to see some of the movements being faster, sometimes they feel a bit slow.
    i'd also like a 720p GI re-render, as the flick deserves

    i really like the characters/ camera angles/shots /modeling.
    it deserves some FFX hair as well (use the polygonal hair version to make sure it renders ok)

    you probably hate me telling you to re-render, but the flick is very good, upgrade it,
    make it look like Pixar.
    Last edited by erikals; 07-23-2010 at 07:33 PM.
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    Very cool short. A short story should have a unique concept and yours even has a good start and finish. I have trouble getting good ideas to make a short.
    The animation needs work but I'm sure they're all hand animated and as I only know how to clean up mocap, I admire people who can animate by hand.
    Maybe a new version could be made with better lighting and camera work but keep the characters and concept.

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