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OnlineRender
03-18-2009, 02:37 PM
Yeeeee finally got my website working , im still to add my demo reel and finalize some of the images and coding but i thought i would show you first .

It might drop of at times mainly because im editing it right now .

http://www.onlinerender.com

so here's the script , i went to high school with two friends , when we left we went different directions , but a year ago we meet for some beers , after some long hard chats we decided to go it alone together .

we are all educated to Degree Level most of us have honours from Glasgow based Universities "I'm the one that cant spell "
we have done some work for different clients but we all specialize in media in some format .

so here it is hope you like ?, please comment and critic and let me know if runs ok .
we have a certain small target audience , hence why the text font is small , basically i don't want your next doors neighbour gran phoning me up asking me to do some graphics for her churches newsletter , you get the idea !

http://www.onlinerender.com
SKYPE :onlinerender
email: [email protected]

Critics please

Mission St
OnlineRender are a group of individuals from various different creative backgrounds, like-minded in their endeavour to express ideas and implement their ideas as a group. Combined, our team are organised, analytical, good communicators and have good leadership and research skills. We are structured with the intention of providing each team member the opportunity to create and define their own ideas with the full support of the other members. Together we aim to share our expertise with one another to merge our creative talents to envision the best product possible for our clients.


anywork i cant handdle or creat my self , i will throw it to Newtek forum first , if that is OK ? but beetween the 3 of us i reckon we can take over the world , well ill settle for scotland first :)

OnlineRender
03-18-2009, 04:57 PM
that good ??

akademus
03-19-2009, 03:20 AM
Pretty good. It's obvious you are using flash template (or not :D ). It good be 125% larger in total, it appears too small at the moment.

Gallery section needs to be clearer and I had some troubles scrolling down, took me some times to figure where to place the pointer.

Other than that, welcome online!

And yeah, turn the sound off by default. It so annoying when you go to someones website and suddenly your speakers (up to max volume) scare the crap out of you :D

OnlineRender
03-19-2009, 04:19 AM
yeeee result some feedback , ye i ripped the flash codding from another source , the design mines sort of! , but i cant actionscript to save myself , im having trouble with the size , i have created a table in html to auto centre but i thinks its crushing it somehow , i have made an original html version "totally diffirent "of the site but im still doing the graphics atm , the flash version is only to look nice and fancy :P

heres the origianal mook i made for the html

http://www.onlinerender.com/web12.gif

OnlineRender
03-19-2009, 04:21 AM
from now on all my posts are going to be CG related , this way it stop people going off-topic "ye right " LOL

akademus
03-19-2009, 04:52 AM
I didn't get whether you are using the last one or the original flash one.

On the html one, online render logo is disaster from graphic design point of view :D It makes you look like you're two goths trying to earn extra doe, hehe. Cheap PS bevel and default shadow makes it look totally unprofessional. Same goes for the globe and thing in the right bottom corner. You need to sync the elements for consistency in design.

Hope this helps.

Best of luck, I've started the same way!

meshpig
03-19-2009, 05:02 AM
The mission statement is a bit of a mouthful though; all over the place like a madwoman's make-up!

m:)

OnlineRender
03-19-2009, 05:06 AM
LOL ye i know it was only a mook design nothing final more a page layout guide than anything ive been messing about trying to find the correct combination , true! default photoshop elements look shall we say shawdaaaaaaaaaa ! ive been working on a logo , well when i say logo more a design . Ill use the flash site for now , mainly because its clean . i dont want to post any of my demo work untill its properly eddited , here the logo design . .kinda i-pod look

original concept idea
http://www.onlinerender.com/ORbackgroundjpg.jpg

heres the logo design

http://www.onlinerender.com/web copy.jpg

crashnburn
03-20-2009, 09:42 AM
It's nice and fast I found, so no chance of losing someones interest while they sit waiting staring at a blank screen. But the size could be an issue as some of the images are too small to see in detail. If the images were maybe twice the size and you kept that speed it would be way better.

Netvudu
03-21-2009, 10:49 AM
not to discourage, but the name of your site sounds like a render service provider. I thought it was one.

OnlineRender
03-21-2009, 12:52 PM
Ye i suppose a name change could be possible , but i generally think onlinerender is decent enough " i suppose i could have something like Glasgow Animations or something similliar

wounder what was going threw my mind when i concepted this idea


http://www.onlinerender.com/ORbackgroundjpg.jpg