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Bionic Antboy
03-18-2009, 01:58 PM
Wow, it's been years since I've posted here. Surprised that my account is still working. :) Anyways, we decided to work on a little side project, and finished the first couple of animations, so I thought I'd get some feedback...

The first rant (which I'm mostly unhappy about):
Soap Box (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0pYY4QlSWs)

The latest rant (which I like better):
Web cam Rant (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nv1ktsPt3kw)

Any and all C&C are welcome.

vahid2009
03-19-2009, 11:13 AM
very good

Bionic Antboy
03-26-2009, 08:48 AM
Thanks. Starting next week, we're going to try and see if we can crank out at least one every two weeks, sometimes in an all CGI environment, sometimes in the real world.

rdolishny
03-30-2009, 03:01 PM
I think you're trying to do too many things at once and the concept is really suffering. The animation is really weak, the lipsync is ambitious but not very well done. The sets are pretty crude ... but it's impressive that you've done so much so quickly.

Consider concentrating on just one element of an animation like these. Make that one thing really good, then move on to something else.

EDIT I just noticed you're in Toronto too. I wish we had an active users group...