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notus
07-28-2003, 06:00 AM
hi there,
my 1st post in this forum,
what do you think about this pic


notus

Matt
07-28-2003, 06:17 AM
nice moon shimmer on the water!

Dave3D
07-28-2003, 06:36 AM
Really like the image, i think i have some thing to make it better, as the image of moon doesnt seem that accurate, so these maps might help.

Image Map
http://gw.marketingden.com/planets/images/moonmaps/moonmap1k.jpg

Bump Map
http://gw.marketingden.com/planets/images/moonmaps/moonbump1k.jpg

:) Dave

renatolazzaroni
07-28-2003, 06:51 AM
The water and rock textures look great.
I am not sure the "fish" (or is it a mammal swimmer ?) would be so visible in these lighting conditions, but all in all, it's a great pic.

Renato

riki
07-28-2003, 08:41 AM
The fish is on a bit of a strange angle. You might want to play around with the composition a bit.

hrgiger
07-28-2003, 10:00 AM
To me, the fish is too apparent. I don't know of any natural water that you can see that clearly, especially at night.

sanuZ
07-29-2003, 06:35 AM
Yeah, I agree with the others! the fish is the od one out!gotto dimm it a bit!

notus
07-30-2003, 01:07 AM
hmmmm
i dont know about the fish,

...i know he is very bright, ...i gona try some modifications

thanx for your comments

:)

and for the moon texture !!!

richpr
07-30-2003, 07:13 PM
Dim the moon and the fish... You need to see the moon's surface, here it looks more like a sun...

I found the fish's position a bit awkward too... squashed by perspective...

Great scene!

KissMyGrits
08-03-2003, 11:36 PM
It seems strange how there is only one row of grass, mostly because it is all just about the same size. The rock surfaces and the swimmer object are great. For that matter just about everything else in the scene is great.

notus
08-04-2003, 01:01 AM
hi,
yes you are right, the gras is what i mostly dislike in this pic
..actually..the basic was a lightning study for the rock in the mittle
..and everyting arround was made in 1 day only (the mountains and the tree was used in another pic before)
so ..in the nex pic i will spend more time 2 make it better
:-)