View Full Version : Character: Tough guy update

07-18-2003, 10:46 AM

Here are a few renders of this model i've been working on. This my v5 of this model i posted earlier...
Rendered + modeled in lw.


C+c welcome.

07-18-2003, 11:16 AM
His lips are looking a little feminine.

07-18-2003, 02:59 PM
Very good - the only thing I really notice is the horizontal wrinkles in the nose area between the eyes - something not quite right there.


07-19-2003, 01:20 PM
The eyes are amazing.

The problem is that he's got 45 year old wrinkles and 20 year old hair. It's too inconsistent.

The upper lip could be fat, but not quite so fat as it's portrayed, esp. when compared to the lower lip.

Still, very, very good. Please keep us updated.

mega maniac
07-22-2003, 12:57 PM
the nose and eyes look all wrong, the model is great and i lov all that is below the nose, it is looking very good, but just look at a poto of somebody then look at the shadows on the bridge of the nose inbetween the eyes.

all i can tell from the pic

-the eyes seem to blur toward the nose, why?
-the white of the eyes is simply to dull eyes are wet and therefore reflective!
-the wrinkles down either side of the nose simply shouldnt be there they are out of place.
-the darkness eitherside of the nose is also out of place, it looks like he has been punched very evenly wither side of his nose, that kind of dullness happens under the eyes due to lack of sleep, but either side of the nose looks very wrong
-the eyes are too small, and does he have pink eyeliner on?
-the skin is very very pale on the forehead and upper cheaks, he should be more tanned as the chin is nicely brown
-the bottom of the nose looks like it has been taken out of a photo, completely flat.
-the hair is not quite right for the character, i get the impression the guy should have short stubby hair, atleast ive never seen a gangsta on tv or otherwise with hair like that! it could atleast be a bit more messy

quite a large crit, hope it helps

now let me say some good stuff

i love the face from the filcrum and below, the lips are pretty real, and the tan on the skin is very good, the hair is also very good, everything below the filcrum is excellent in my opinion, also the hair on his head is very good and convincing, but as i said out of place.

hope this helps man!