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renton
02-20-2003, 01:03 PM
Here is my latest YMCA rendering.
What do you think?
Any suggestions on how I could make it look better?

thanx,
Ren

renton
02-20-2003, 01:16 PM
opps

phyc249
02-20-2003, 03:07 PM
very nice work. the trees look really nice.

something about the lighting doesnt seem right though. it seems like there should be more shadows.

renton
02-20-2003, 06:19 PM
Yeah, I rendered it with no scene lights just radiosity and the trees a guy in the forum just gave to me...

Thanx, russ

Rory_L
02-20-2003, 06:45 PM
Hello there!

The sky needs work. It just is not the sky you`d see at that camera elevation. There should be a gradient of saturation, working its way from your clear blue at the top, to a kind of non-descript, muddy colour at ground level.

...Unless your building`s in the Andes, in which case there`s no air polution and you`re spot on. :D



Yeah, I rendered it with no scene lights just radiosity and the trees a guy in the forum just gave to me...

So render it with radiosity and a sun light!

R

Elotiel
02-21-2003, 09:55 AM
The world seems to end immediately after the building, you need to put in a horizon!