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nads
01-22-2007, 03:09 AM
Hello,

This is a still, for a new short im currently making. Crits welcome.

http://server18.web-mania.com/users/adamatio/still/city_street.jpg

Nads

www.adamations.co.uk

blindsided
01-22-2007, 03:32 AM
hmm,
difficult to know what to say...
'WOW amazing, i wish i could make something 1/millionth as good as that' springs to mind.
Lovely style and models, cant wait to see more.

Kuzey
01-22-2007, 05:54 AM
Superness!!!

I love the first car, if you put wings on that baby you'll have a plane :thumbsup:

Love to see more!

Kuzey

Skinner3D
01-22-2007, 11:06 AM
;D That looks really good. Are you planning to put people in those cars? Are we allowed to know what the short is going to be about?

neversummer
01-22-2007, 12:27 PM
Good looking scene. Perhaps add a couple procedural textures as dirt layers for the car windows, (car bodies look dirty & slightly rusty but windows are very clean). The line of white bricks in the left background looks odd, like they are sticking out too far from the building. Car designs are really cool :thumbsup:

WilliamVaughan
01-22-2007, 12:56 PM
Perfect Style!

LAV
01-22-2007, 01:24 PM
You have your own style! I like it.

nads
01-22-2007, 01:50 PM
Thanks guys,


Sorry shoud've said in the first post. But there's a low res trailer and some more stills on....

www.adamations.co.uk

in the film section.

Neversummer: Thanks for the comments..there is some procederal dirt on the windows...i might need to wack up the opacity a bit. Think the bricks thing is a optical illusion as they only stick out a bit. But i'll have a closer look.

Thanks
nads

robbiesmith79
01-22-2007, 09:05 PM
The movie plays right?

nads
01-23-2007, 01:35 AM
Yeah it should do, i think there's problems viewing it on safari...mozilla is fine. I'll have a look.

Kuzey
01-23-2007, 05:01 AM
Wonderful trailer...I love the retro style :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Kuzey

McFilms
01-23-2007, 08:27 AM
Very cool!

I love the caricature design style!

Mrjack
01-23-2007, 10:52 AM
exelent i lovit nothing to say i dont like too much the lighting....
but i lovit

bobakabob
01-27-2007, 07:43 AM
Great work and nice 60s retro styling. Love the trailer!

oDDity
01-27-2007, 11:01 AM
That character is surely based on that little round-headed Bod-type freak, Karl Pilkington?

dxyner
01-27-2007, 07:32 PM
I like the style a lot, but it looks like the grunge maps on the windows of the background buildings are too strong and too procedural. They need more variation IMO. Otherwise I think it's a great composition.

Carlovfx
01-28-2007, 08:05 PM
You have your own style! I like it.

Quoting, and your website is really cool :thumbsup:

nads
01-29-2007, 02:52 AM
Thanks for all your comments people.

oDDity. The characters not based on Karl Pilkington :).. Its based on a friend of mine. BUt can see the resemblance. Thanks again for the commments