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99sproth
01-15-2006, 12:58 PM
Hey guys!

Just finished off this final render. Took me 2 days work. About 15 hours in total.

I'm loking for freelance so if you like it and need a job done, I'm your man!

http://www.machinestudios.co.uk/hosted/Bunker_Small_2.jpg

Heres the WIP (http://www.newtek.com/forums/showthread.php?p=329686#post329686)

Comments welcomed. Anyone reckon this is good enough for the Lw gallery?

-Simon

stevecullum
01-15-2006, 05:39 PM
Great work! - Five stars

M.A.S.
01-17-2006, 10:23 PM
I think I can safely say that if you posted this as an actual photograph of an old bunker in your area (someplace other than a CGI forum of course) nobody would doubt it for a minute.
:thumbsup:

From the CGI standpoint however, I would advise that you should actually model a bit of the detail, some irregularity, into the columns (in particular). When you look at the edges, they are too clean and the marvelous texture work cannot entirely hide this.

I really do like it. Just being picky tonight.

Michael

99sproth
01-23-2006, 09:45 AM
I think I can safely say that if you posted this as an actual photograph of an old bunker in your area (someplace other than a CGI forum of course) nobody would doubt it for a minute.
:thumbsup:

From the CGI standpoint however, I would advise that you should actually model a bit of the detail, some irregularity, into the columns (in particular). When you look at the edges, they are too clean and the marvelous texture work cannot entirely hide this.

I really do like it. Just being picky tonight.

Michael

Hey thanks for the comment!

Yeah I think the pillars are the weakness of the whole piece. They could do with some work. Could just do that in post, so no biggie.

Thanks for the star ratings! :D

Simon