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hyzwxm
11-16-2005, 08:30 PM
the creation of tank takes me much time. the final sky background was made by Photoshop.

nthused
11-17-2005, 06:08 AM
VERY nice modeling.

I recommend trying global illumination with the scene for better lighting. The lighting now is a bit harsh IMO.

Once again, beautiful work.

MooseDog
11-17-2005, 07:29 AM
seconded. the modelling looks exceptional, hard to discern that from the presentation of the scene. keep going!

starbase1
11-17-2005, 07:39 AM
:agree: I agree too.

I'd also suggest a lower viewpoint, to increase the sense of scale. People tend to assume that the vioewpoint is at eye height unless there is something in the scene to contradict this.

Nick

bluerider
11-17-2005, 08:58 AM
Yes.....lower viewpoint.

Also having the canon being cut off on the left, leads the viewers eye out of the composition.

Lightning definately to harsh as already mentioned.

What about some falloff to help show scale as well?

Great Tank......what class is it?

bobakabob
11-17-2005, 09:26 AM
Excellent work - that's a fab, detailed model. If you work on the composition, as suggested you'll have a striking image there.

Top Cat
11-19-2005, 11:52 AM
Cool, I was working on a tank but I gave up