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JML
04-24-2005, 08:39 AM
and probably the last one ;)

14 and famous
04-24-2005, 12:02 PM
Nice but just 2 things
The hair is a bit weird and it looks like that mouth isn't her mouth but just sticked on it with glue :D
But don't give up on it :rolleyes:

Darrell
05-21-2005, 10:11 AM
nice model. love her eyes...not a big fan of the eye brows though...her hair don't look right...more like a hard wig than hair coming from her scalp...i'll love to see a revision of this model :)

Psycho Zo
05-21-2005, 12:47 PM
I actually like her hair.. stylised.
Yeah now that 14 noticed.. the lips do look stuck on a bit...
My crit has to do with the cranium, you haven't given her a big enough head at the back to fit her brain in properly.

kopperdrake
05-24-2005, 04:19 AM
Hi :) Great 1st attempt! My main thing would be to make the chin and jawline less strong - they're leaning towards being too manly. That'll make a huge impact on the whole feel of the image, believe me :)

Dunk

madskillzTokyo
05-27-2005, 12:50 AM
#2 kinda looks like Marilyn Manson... :eek: . Good model though!

JML
05-27-2005, 07:38 AM
#2 kinda looks like Marilyn Manson... :eek: .

ouch.. :)

I first wanted to recreate jessica alba, then in between, I decided it was too much pain to match somebody and I decided to just make somebody.. (but a women)

I stop working on that picture, that was just to for fun, to see how it was..
I might one day take that model and modify it a lot to create a monster...