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guardonduty
01-13-2005, 01:34 PM
Word Cup soccer boy. Created in LW painted in Bodypaint

chemaelizondo
01-13-2005, 01:42 PM
A little critique, if I may
Is overall good work but I think the text on the foot ball needs a little more refinment.

The fluidity of the model is quite good though.

JM :)

adrian
01-14-2005, 01:20 AM
I like it although I agree about the text on the football. It looks like it has a white patch around it.

Adrian.

guardonduty
01-14-2005, 01:11 PM
Updated pic. Comments and critiques r welcome

Ge4-ce
01-14-2005, 04:32 PM
I like the second one more than the first one!

Does he have a teethprotector piece in his mouth? Or are those his teeth?

If they are his teeth, then they are grown together. Make seperate teeth and put them together. Because of the better shadows you get, it will look better.

Maybe the dark area under the nose is a bit too dark? That can be a matter of taste.

Great job for the rest!

adrian
01-15-2005, 12:49 AM
I like the second pic better than the first too. However I think the teeth are fine, even though they do look grown together. As the guy is a cartoon character I think it works well. But that's just me....

Design on the ball is nice.

Why don't you put a little grass on the plane he's standing on just for that little extra touch?

Adrian.