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Holger
10-25-2004, 04:17 PM
Critique and comments are welcome.

http://img89.exs.cx/img89/990/Tanks.jpg

http://img89.exs.cx/img89/7286/AlienWorld.jpg

http://img89.exs.cx/img89/1329/Scorpion.jpg

Seademon
10-25-2004, 08:26 PM
i love your scorpian :D , very unique.

adrian
10-27-2004, 10:45 AM
I would say the landscape in your first pic is a little to polygon-like (the edges are a little sharp in places). Also you should add a few things in to break up the uniformity of the landscape. And sorry to say, but I'm just not convinced by the ground texture you've used.

The tanks are good as is the slug!

The scorpion is really great work - perfect!

Adrian.

A.M.
10-27-2004, 11:28 AM
That scorpion is awesome and that slug made me smile.:D
Great job.

glassefx
10-27-2004, 02:12 PM
For some reason your scorpion which is great reminds me of a rubicks snake puzzle. Guess its the segmentation? I really dig your camera work in the tank render too! Detail out those tanks!

peace

Rory_L
10-28-2004, 01:04 AM
For me, it`s the slug pic that`s best realised and most full of originality and creative invention.

The parts of the scorpion are too remorselessly the same as each other to satisfy the eye, though it does make for design cohesion. Take it to the next level by rebuilding one element using a different visual vocabulary!

The tank scene needs viagra. Lower the camera and add scale; fleeing crows, crushed signposts?

Cheers,

R