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hashusdin
08-04-2004, 05:02 AM
hi.

Everybady thanks.


Hasan H. Dinšer
istanbul - Turkey

hashusdin
08-04-2004, 08:04 AM
Originally posted by hashusdin
hi.

Everybady thanks.


Hasan H. Dinšer
istanbul - Turkey

veljko
08-04-2004, 03:09 PM
the image looks cool- i see some changes that defenitly made the difference-
i have one remark thoug-
i think the scene lacks shadows- This imho gives it an overburnt feel.
i would defently make the shadows a bit stronger
:)
hope this helps!

Holger
08-04-2004, 05:02 PM
Maybe a arealight would make small dark shadows around the napkins etc. Then it would look more realistic.

It is a really good scene with good models, but the lighting needs improvement. :)

hashusdin
08-05-2004, 04:47 AM
Originally posted by hashusdin
hi.

(sory, I know a little english)

Everybady thanks.

render time 2 hours.
area light.

Hasan H. Dinšer
istanbul - Turkey

hashusdin
08-05-2004, 04:53 AM
Originally posted by hashusdin

Zarathustra
08-05-2004, 10:46 AM
how about posting in JUST the WIP forum, until you're, I don't know, maybe finished?

TheDynamo
08-05-2004, 05:51 PM
I would lose the wood panel Background somehow. Perhaps an off-white wall with either darker wood vertical stripes. The lack of negative space in the image makes your eye travel all over the place.

-Rob

hashusdin
08-09-2004, 06:11 AM
Originally posted by Zarathustra
how about posting in JUST the WIP forum, until you're, I don't know, maybe finished?

Death.Druid
08-09-2004, 12:47 PM
I like the 3rd one the best. but to me the one that looks the most real would have to be the second

Jim_C
08-09-2004, 12:55 PM
fwiw I wwould keep the wood wall and lose the wood table


:rolleyes:

hashusdin
08-10-2004, 07:52 AM
the end.

Zarathustra
08-10-2004, 09:59 AM
Man, I REALLY wish you'd figure out which forum to post in.

Those napkins wouldn't cast such harsh shadows. You can either make them translucent or try this trick:
Make your light exclude the napkins
Clone your light 3 times
First clone change to exclude everything but the napkins, shadows off
Second make low, like 15% or less with shadows on
Third make negative of second (ie. - if second is 15%, make third -15%), shadows off

Now you'll have a weaker shadow for the napkins. So try that and also try posting in the right forum (ie - post in Work in Progress since this is a work in progress). No one's gonna ever hire you if you can't follow simple directions.

hashusdin
08-12-2004, 07:40 AM
Originally posted by hashusdin
hi.

(sory, I know a little english)

new napkins (shadow-suface-bump)


Hasan H. Dinšer
istanbul - Turkey :D