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dilaima
06-30-2004, 06:56 AM
this is another building viz, comments and critics are welcomed as usuall.

dilaima
07-02-2004, 06:20 PM
any comments or suggestions please.

bloontz
07-02-2004, 06:43 PM
Looks very good in general but I find the camera distortion somewhat distracting.

dilaima
07-02-2004, 07:00 PM
thanks for ur critics bloontz, actually yes maybe there is a distortion in the lens, but it was the only angle i can shoot the real environment to c all the view, it was a little fishy, but not too much.

bloontz
07-02-2004, 07:20 PM
I think it's the placement of the cars and people in the foreground that accentuates the effect, or maybe it's just me. I can appreciate the difficulty in framing that shot and minimizing distorition. Maybe if you pull those objects back it will help, I think the foreground is a little to busy and ditracts from your archetectural subject.

dilaima
07-02-2004, 07:27 PM
yeah i'm 100% with u bloontz, but u know when it come to the client, he insist on what he like and think it's the best.