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sailor
03-27-2003, 07:00 AM
hi thre :)

somethin new...hope i will have the courgae to finsih it...not totally happy with the arm design still workin on it any crits welcum

renatolazzaroni
03-27-2003, 07:30 AM
Sexy !
Did you model the "human" part yourself ?
One thing though, I am not too sure about the "cut out" right breast replaced by a prosthetic, and the skin ridge/fold/pinch it makes where it joins the body. It looks a bit out of place in an otherwise elegant model.
Don't you want to cover the breast instead, with some kind of plate ?
Just a tought,

Renato

jin'a
03-27-2003, 08:14 AM
Really good, but i think the right arm is a bit stumpy, but that could just be the angle that the image was rendered!

sailor
03-27-2003, 03:39 PM
hey thanks for the crits...yes i did the human mesh as well...i will take into consideration ur opinions anyway is stil wip about the breast implant it will be more integrated
jin'a sorry but i dont know what "stumpy" means hehe :)

thx

silverline
03-27-2003, 04:21 PM
nice model - I thought the cyber-hand looked a little funky, hand too big for the fingers/fingers too small, or something like that.

I was just curious on your lighting setup for this little hottie( specifics) . I have some models I'd like to post here, but I havent really learned any good light setups yet.

Finger
03-28-2003, 05:00 AM
Nice model. The breast should be worked, and she misses one finger... I think you should hide her private parts, itīs not necessary and disturbing.

DragonAngel
03-28-2003, 10:44 AM
FINGER ??? What are you talking about unessary and disturbing. You post, here http://vbulletin.newtek.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2400, is much more disturbing (Well atleast unexpected) than the areas here.

My God, if I wasn't so open minded, I would swear that you are just ModelMonkey back with a new nick.

Hmmm....

:eek:

Finger
03-28-2003, 10:56 AM
If a naked woman is disturbing for you, well then i donīt really know what to say to you... :(

I just tried to explain him, how the girls anatomy is... with that fine example ;)

hrgiger
03-28-2003, 02:57 PM
I don't think it's a naked woman that disturbs anyone. I think you shoving your finger at her genitals and saying naughty area alert is what's unnecessary. Do you do that in real life? That's just rude.

d8ed
03-28-2003, 03:13 PM
haha yeah.. Finger.. pointing isnt polite dude. and this is art.. not pornography. we're all adults here i hope. then again.. i've seen some 12 year old lightwavers around here before. maybe you should put those fingers to good use and keep working on that Zeus wip.

riki
03-28-2003, 06:16 PM
The head looks very realistic but the machines bits look more stylistic. Also I think you need more detail in the machine arm, plus maybe it looks too short??

Gui Lo
03-29-2003, 10:36 AM
Hmmm... as Dick Emery used to say 'Hello sailor'.

The image looks great.
The body especially looks very good. Breasts are all shapes and sizes so I wouldn't work on it too much and the genetelia(?) looks very natural i.e. does not look like molded plastic.

My comments are that the head looks big for the body and the 'natural' hand looks like a mans.

Since this is cyber then maybe this is intensional.

Hope this helps

Gui Lo