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DM67
06-05-2004, 04:36 PM
My F-16 :D

DM67
06-05-2004, 04:37 PM
:p

DM67
06-05-2004, 04:37 PM
:rolleyes:

hazmat777
06-06-2004, 01:22 AM
Wow! Great job. The texture on the fuselage looks really good.

The only things I might work on are the canopy and engine glow. Maybe more specularity on the canopy and a little noise or more transparency to the blue glow?

Just huntin' and peckin'. Looks great!

What kind of source material?

emperorchuck
06-06-2004, 09:07 PM
Yes, very nice model! Great render. The only critique I have regards the HUD - that's a pretty damn bright glow for outside. Those things reflect at the pilot, not away. Tone it down a bit so it doesn't pull my eye in, and it'll be super.

veljko
06-07-2004, 02:07 AM
cool images- i like the first one best-
they have a non-realistic, stilised look to them, but i dont mean it
as a critique- i quite like it:)

harlan
06-08-2004, 11:08 PM
The first image is [email protected]

The second image looks distorted, and the surfacing is a bit odd.

The third image looks nice, but the surfacing is way outta whack. Perhaps too much specularity on the fuselage.

Hmmm not sure about the latter 2 images, there's just something funky going on with the surfacing. I'll have to study them a bit to make a decent critique. The first image is terrific though.

harlan
06-08-2004, 11:11 PM
I'd also lose the exhaust flame...it throws the reality of the image off. Especially in the first image. Kill the flame, and utilize some heat distortion type effects instead.

emperorchuck
06-09-2004, 12:50 PM
Now that Harlan mentions it, the surface settings are a bit off. It looks like the fuselage has the same specularity as the exhaust cone. If I remember correctly, US Air Force jets use a very non-specular matte paint. You've got the color perfectly, but it's too glossy looking. They almost look soft in real life. Great job, though!

harlan
06-09-2004, 12:55 PM
Yep yep, dull/matte paint, certainly reduces the odds of sparkling in flight. Sparkling = Easy to see target!!!

hazmat777
06-09-2004, 11:44 PM
You are right about the specularity. Didn't notice 'till it was mentioned.

artmarci
06-10-2004, 10:25 AM
Yep nice F-16 allright :)
Those images ...like it is straight from a movie or something (If it isnt i whould say LETS DO IT dying to c some kewl dogfight action around here think Macross or Topgun when ya do it)

So i gues i am gonna make some of my own Jets coss DM67 you have me convinced again :D so KUTGW!

and btw "[email protected]" <---harlan hehe funny