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KK 's
05-07-2004, 10:31 AM
http://www.geocities.com/kkdsign/Princessokay.html

I hope ur Can Giv some comment to me thanks!:)

Zarathustra
05-07-2004, 11:22 AM
Eye area is the biggest problem.

Eyebrows too low
Eye's sem a tad large
Need more work/deinition around the eyes and the outside corners of the eyes.

Philtrum is too wide

Nose is bottom heavy

Lips look good. I hate making lips.

What's the hair done with?

adrian
05-07-2004, 03:57 PM
What's the philtrum?

I like the hair - how did you do that?

I agree about the eyebrows - too low, especially towards the nose.

You need to work on the skin texture as well, it looks too uniform at the moment. Maybe add some freckles or something.

Adrian.

KK 's
05-08-2004, 02:09 AM
okay, thanks reply. For the hair, I model a plane and put hair texture on it (UV map), then clone a lot ! and apply Clipmap for the hair. :)

KK 's
05-08-2004, 02:15 AM
http://www.geocities.com/kkdsign/uu.html

mic3d
05-08-2004, 04:14 AM
I really like this. I can see why people give advice on proportions because if reality is what you're after then obviously there are parts that need changing. But sometimes in these forums there are some great looking models and they lose a lot of character as they become more "photo real" and not everyone is looking to recreate a photo. (and I don't mean to say that the very realistic models are dull, just look at Giger's fantastic realism combined with amazing creativity). The hair's great and I particularly like the subtle colours in the eyes, so good stuff let's see more. Are you looking for hyper-real or not?

KK 's
05-14-2004, 03:35 PM
okay, thanks for comment, and here is current update...
http://www.geocities.com/kkdsign/princess001.html
http://www.geocities.com/kkdsign/princess002.html

veljko
05-15-2004, 05:21 AM
Hi to all-
the dress and the texturing of the clothes are done really well-
the face is cool, but overall can still go a few steps farther-
:)