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Mat
04-19-2004, 03:07 PM
I'm not quite sure what you meen ?

here is another installment

I haven't over used the lights this time

and now they have a few more textures

my next challenge will be to add cloths

(I don't know if this will work) I am trying to replace this image

TSpyrison
04-19-2004, 04:07 PM
No offense, but they look a little stiff…
and whats with the wierd nipple things?

MorituriMax
04-20-2004, 11:48 AM
Yeah, they still look like mannequins...

..well done manniquins, but still... plus, this is the Finished Forum, you might move this to the WIP if it's just another "installment."

freedik
04-21-2004, 11:20 AM
At first sight it didn't look too good. But at closer look I noticed that her torso is modelled nearly perfectly and is very live. How could you miss so bad with hands ;)
Overall proportions are quite good too, just hands are too thin. Few adjustments and you'll have a nice model.

You're scene will be greatly improved if you use linear light for example, since its an indoor sceen. And radiosity of course.

Seeing your nice model, you seem to have a lot of potential but need lots of learning and practicing (as do I :p).

MorituriMax
04-21-2004, 11:34 AM
yeah I agree with freedik, there are some parts of the model that are very well done.. perhaps if you worked on sections like the hands it will be 5-star quality.. it's certainly better than I could model a human right now.

Mat
04-21-2004, 04:42 PM
Thanks for you input fellow lightwavers

you are right about the hands they do need work

and of corse the lighting is the key, can also be tinkered with

at the moment I am working on another image in the wip gallery and I have adressed this problem I think.

I have reworked my base pose with a new hair style including difuse texture and transparency.

to change this image now I would want to add the new textures for the eyes that I have in the new image, add new the new hair.
This can be done.

If enough people want a new version of this image I will deliver

Mat
04-22-2004, 04:06 PM
AAAArrrrggg I was trying to replace the top image with this one,
Because I don't beleive that this one is a wip image..

unfortunately I think I should have ticked the replace image
box insted of trying to delete then edit again...

This is the final render of this lws

My next project will be to create a Bath tub sceen which I will
probably use for the cover of my comic that I am working on..

Thanks for all of your constructive comments guys

Honarable mentions

MorituriMax
freedik

keep up the good work

thanks mat