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03-08-2003, 04:58 PM
Hey everyone!

Haven't been back here in awhile and it looks good with the new bulletin boards. Here's a quickie we threw together for a self promo-ad here locally.

03-08-2003, 05:14 PM
not bad for a quickie...the smoke looks excellent, not to mention the plane.

03-08-2003, 06:24 PM
Wonderful and great composition!!


03-10-2003, 02:21 AM
would look better with a photo of a real sky and not skytracer.


03-10-2003, 02:42 AM
ahh, here is "here" ;)

nice image, great plane model. Maybe add a turbulence texture to that smoke and tweak the skytracer a bit since that is the weakes part of the image.

03-10-2003, 05:27 PM
Looks pretty cool--however I agree with the others...the sky might be hurting the piece a little. The smoke looks really slick, however against that sky it gets a little "busy" as far as composition goes. Maybe push the sky back a little by making it lighter so there's more of a fore/background feel. Especially at the end of the smoke trail, it's getting a little confusing against the clouds.

But don't get me wrong--it's pretty nice!

03-12-2003, 12:57 AM
Well I think the smoke is spot on!

03-21-2003, 07:52 AM
LW gallery material!

03-25-2003, 07:46 PM
Thanks for all the positive comments on the graphic. As I said, it was a quickie to fulfill a need and that's the reason we didn't spend too much time on the sky. If I ever get the time, I'll go back and rework the sky as well as put some serious animation to it, in the meantime, it's back to work on the paying gigs! :)