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Khang Wei
12-27-2003, 12:36 AM
hai this is my short animation about a dying kid... just want to test out the lighting and also the mood... hope u guys like it...

http://notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/so_long.jpg

c&c are welcome

Khang Wei
12-27-2003, 01:41 AM
here are the screen capture from the movie...

http://notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/screenshot0.jpg

http://notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/screenshot1.jpg

http://notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/screenshot2.jpg

http://notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/screenshot4.jpg

veljko
12-27-2003, 01:56 AM
Hi- the scene looks kul, but if i was doing it i would add some contrast to it.
Its a bit to much in the gray area of intensety-
I think you got that effect becouse there are no sharp (and dark) shadows in the image

othervise, looks cool:)

Chrysolithos
12-27-2003, 10:19 PM
Looks good. But what appears to be a florescent tube light is casting a rathar strong circular pattern on the celing and wall.

And as far as the equipment in the room goes, why are there three monitors? The bed should be the type that adjust in height and angle. (Unless this is some sort of hospice room) Some chest leads going from the boy to the monitor/s would be nice.
(I repair medical equipment, so I'm in hospital rooms a lot.)
Good job over all, though. Nice gloomy mood.