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ericsmith
12-14-2003, 11:07 PM
Here's a human character I've been working on.

http://www.imotionstudio.com/figure.jpg

and a closeup of the face...

http://www.imotionstudio.com/face.jpg

Jake
12-15-2003, 03:46 AM
Hi.
Good work. Three things stand out to me:
1. The eyes are too big for the head, unless you're going for some kind of stylization. Also the ears could use some more work, the anatomy is off.
2. The arms and legs appear a bit out of proportion with the torso and head (smaller). More so the lower legs.
3. The shoulder blades look a bit bunched up. They sould be wider, flater, and more square.

Nothing a little tinkering couldn't fix.

renatolazzaroni
12-15-2003, 05:18 AM
I like the skin texture for the face, but I will add a couple of comments:
- The irises look too big. They should take less space in the eyes and leave more for the whites.
- The eyebrows look fake, plasticky (sp?) and painted. Maybe you could use saslite for the eyebrows instead of texturing them.
Just my comments.

Renato

Zarathustra
12-15-2003, 11:16 AM
First: Is it finished? There's a forum for works in progress.

Second: Complete your modeling, I mean COMPLETE, before you start any texturing. That will save you many hours and headaches.