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santi
10-21-2003, 04:08 PM
this is a character I am finishing.....comments please.



http://e.1asphost.com/santi3d/websanti/pops/images/chica1.jpg

hrgiger
10-21-2003, 05:22 PM
Did you do all the modeling yourself?

I'd like to see the rest of the outfit.

I like the style of the hair but it looks a bit flat. Did you use a clip map?

renderingfarmer
10-21-2003, 09:53 PM
She looks like Cher.

By the way, are you going to make said spaceship?

w_will
10-21-2003, 10:05 PM
Ouch she might put out an eye with those pointy projectiles :D Speaking of points you might want to try pointing the ears to emphisize the fact it is a stylized character. I might shrink the brow a little also if I were you to give a more delicate bone structure. I do like it overall, but it does look like she is cold and I would hate to see the forehead on a male of her species. I agree I would like to see the rest of the outfit too.

santi
10-22-2003, 08:33 AM
this the full body....


http://e.1asphost.com/santi3d/imagenesmias/chica cuero2.jpg

santi
10-22-2003, 08:35 AM
the hair is sasquatch........

hrgiger
10-22-2003, 08:53 AM
Ok, even though it's a little overdone to see the nipples poking through the costume, I'm not sure I undestand why the suit is being sucked into the belly button?

Hands look like they might be a little small...

w_will
10-22-2003, 11:40 AM
Thanks for the full body shot. I agree the belly button should be smoothed out, and try adding some definition to the knuckles. After seeing the whole character I definatley feel the skull is too large. It would add a more femine quality, and not look like too much of a strain on her neck if the frontal lobe were shrunk a little. The wrinkles look great. I would consider lengthening the sleeves so they come closer to the thumb and loosen the wrist area a little.

riki
10-22-2003, 08:56 PM
Is it just me or do the proportions look a bit odd? leangth of arms, size of head, maybe it's just the angle? Not sure.

santi
10-23-2003, 03:31 AM
well, as I am reading, I should have posted in th e WIP area, you are all right in your opinions and I have been tweaking the proportions and maybe I am getting somewere...

sorry for my English....

thank you for make me open the eyes.

(I took out the hair in order to see the head better)

http://e.1asphost.com/santi3d/imagenesmias/jpegproporciones.jpg