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azman_821009
04-01-2011, 07:42 AM
Hey guys,

This is the latest project I did yesterday, for both perspective & animation. Feel free to comment or share any ideas..i would like to improve myself further. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7sauRqtJwYI

Thanks.

Azmen

Oleeblood
04-01-2011, 05:36 PM
Very nice work!

UltraViolet
04-01-2011, 11:00 PM
I like everything but the flags, unless they are painted on metal plates :D

azman_821009
04-02-2011, 12:43 AM
Thanks guys. :)

Anyway for the flags was right. I forgot to put cloth fx into it as the time was very short in 10 days included render time. After this I should prepare something like a library for that stuff. ;)

abdelkarim
04-03-2011, 11:48 AM
nice work. but i think about lighting u can do more.

:D

Iain
04-03-2011, 12:12 PM
Really nice. I love the lighting in the last image posted above.

Shadows are a bit dark in places and some camera moves are too fast or don't work so well (eg flying through leaves that are flat polygons!) but overall its a great bit of work.

I hate projects like this-they are incredibly daunting and I always feel I totally compromised afterwards.

DELTA DIGITAL
04-17-2011, 01:33 AM
Nice work for 10 days... would love to see wires for it...

archijam
04-17-2011, 12:51 PM
Nice work for the time. Congrats!

Small crits (if you want them):
- Greens are a little oversaturated and 'flat' (one shade).
- A few more procedurals in general would have varied the palette.

Much post work involved? lens flares etc all ?

azman boleh! ;)

3dworks
04-17-2011, 02:27 PM
nice work! things i'm missing: reflective caustics, especially in the last image, there should be a lot of them in the entrance area. also, i can spot some AA issues in the last image. but maybe it's a scaling problem just affecting the forum post? what was the original size of your rendering? any more details? native LW, fprime, kray, vue...?

cheers

markus

archijam
04-17-2011, 02:59 PM
any more details? native LW, fprime, kray, vue...?

I assume it's kray, looking at his posts in the krayforum gallery: http://www.kraytracing.com/joomla/phpbb/viewforum.php?f=6&w=1680&h=1050

Maybe there is more infos there.

azman_821009
04-17-2011, 08:07 PM
Sorry guys for the late replied. Just finished with another project (http://www.newtek.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1132735#post1132735) and now I'm working for the other projects. (A bit tired lately too much work).

Anyway thank you guys. Really appreciated that. Actually I really want do more but as you guys know the time was short. I will improve it for the next projects. :)

What you guys meant for lighting, shadows and shade? Maybe I can learn something with you guys? :)

Ok, the original size is HD720p (1280x720). Actually this images took from the render sequences. All was done in Kray. ;)

Fadlabi
04-19-2011, 06:53 AM
Nice work, I love the middle one!