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silviotoledo
07-23-2010, 09:54 AM
http://www.youtube.com/user/silviotoledo?feature=chclk#p/u/7/4mWwQPXFJMs

To the ones that did't see my short...

A bit Older. A little instable motions.

But comment the film itself please.

erikals
07-23-2010, 07:27 PM
i'd like to see some of the movements being faster, sometimes they feel a bit slow.
i'd also like a 720p GI re-render, as the flick deserves http://erikalstad.com/backup/anims.php_files/smile.gif

i really like the characters/ camera angles/shots /modeling.
it deserves some FFX hair as well (use the polygonal hair version to make sure it renders ok)

you probably hate me telling you to re-render, but the flick is very good, upgrade it,
make it look like Pixar. http://erikalstad.com/backup/anims.php_files/smile.gif

geo_n
07-24-2010, 09:46 AM
Very cool short. A short story should have a unique concept and yours even has a good start and finish. I have trouble getting good ideas to make a short.
The animation needs work but I'm sure they're all hand animated and as I only know how to clean up mocap, I admire people who can animate by hand.
Maybe a new version could be made with better lighting and camera work but keep the characters and concept.