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alanestrada
07-11-2010, 10:03 AM
Hi there.

I would like feedback on this clip I did.
Be honest.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y9PIXTZAb0Q

nickdigital
07-11-2010, 11:08 AM
Can you elaborate more on what style direction you were going for?

I don't mind the cg look of everything though it looks odd when composited against photographed plates. But with shows like Aqua Teen Hunger Force that do a lot of that maybe that was the point.

Knowing more about the intent/purpose of this project would help so criticism isn't picking on the wrong stuff.

Titus
07-11-2010, 12:04 PM
You need to work more on the cinematic language. What are you trying to say, why do you do this?

Animation is at this moment too robotic, try to make the astronuat bend his legs. Whatch some reference of astronauts/people walking.