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maxwaver
03-10-2010, 04:28 PM
packshot for a commercial .

Soth
03-10-2010, 06:31 PM
awesome!

I would add some more AA and round the edges of the blue box a bit.

sampei
03-11-2010, 03:25 AM
I really like it, I think the planks look a tad flat on the top but overall really nice image :)

savagery
03-12-2010, 11:57 PM
Superb shot. Congrats man

maxwaver
03-21-2010, 06:30 PM
Thanks guys, iam thinking to add some props for a personal version, will post as soon i finish it :)

cresshead
03-22-2010, 01:13 PM
nice pack shot only comment is to up the camera settings for anti-aliasing the edges.

maxwaver
03-22-2010, 04:55 PM
Thanks cresshead, the render is done with fprime, the edge is coming from the zdepth chanel i used to make dof in photoshop !

Here another render with changes as the client requested , me i still prefer the first one with light wood and the small toy.

Soth
03-23-2010, 12:03 AM
me too

btw try to add bevels to wood too (but not too big ones)

Mrjack
03-23-2010, 08:30 AM
Great work maxwaver, this is buy far most beautiful than first shot, the aluminium is more realiste now and maybe with some chromatic aberation it will be perfect.
great and nicely done, keep it up man.