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karlieman
07-22-2009, 01:06 PM
Well this was my one of my first complex models I made as you can see it still needs work. Then again I did make it a year ago.
http://www.newtek.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=75514&d=1248289467 http://www.newtek.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=75515&d=1248289481 http://www.newtek.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=75517&d=1248289510 http://www.newtek.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=75516&d=1248289496

karlieman
07-22-2009, 03:15 PM
No crits? :D

probiner
07-22-2009, 03:33 PM
Might be the signature ^^

I have no crits to make: I really dont' know what to say.

Just gonna point the pinching in the eye's globe. It can be easly fixed :P. 3 solutions:

1- Subdivide the Sphere with Catmull-Clark (use level 2) and Freeze. Use Spherize in Modify>Transform>More. You'll need to size it to orignal size. Don't need to use Subpatch in this one. (You can also make a Cube, Subdivide and Freeze to make a QuadBall with Spherize.)

2- Detail Tab>Poygons>More>FixPoles. Hit this twice.

3-Make a Tesselation Sphere, level 4 is ok and apply Subpatch

Cheers

karlieman
07-22-2009, 03:38 PM
Thanks.::thumbsup:

GregMalick
07-22-2009, 04:48 PM
Crit?

well, Wall-E's arm is attached too low....

http://www.myokyawhtun.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/wall-e.jpg

karlieman
07-22-2009, 05:42 PM
Thanks, I never noticed that before.:thumbsup:

karlieman
07-22-2009, 05:43 PM
Does it look good though besides that?

probiner
07-22-2009, 06:12 PM
Hmm... It's ok but notice that Wall-E has some fair simple shapes with lots of details. You don't have lots of details and the textures could be better, unless this were for a game or something, i don't know. I'm not very good at judging.

But you had the misfortune that another forum user posted this Wall-E model. http://www.newtek.com/forums/showthread.php?t=100460 this allowed me, don't know Wall-E in detail, to make a hard comparisson :P

You can always add more detail.

Chees

GregMalick
07-22-2009, 07:55 PM
Here's a link to another Dave School student's Wall-E.

http://www.spinquad.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26232

Looks like the competition is pretty tough over there.



So like probiner said - "More Cowbell !"

I mean more detail.....

oobievision
08-03-2009, 09:36 AM
the treads look solid and like it cant move.

heres a reference to what wallies tank treads look like also his are adjustable they can change shape.
also there is a path on the side of wall E where his arms can adjust you dont have it in ur model

great start and keep up the good work!
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_K5U0f5L_r6M/SGKDFFTmchI/AAAAAAAAALY/oCRxI6hlJ4Y/s400/Wall-e.jpg