Head like sputnik (continued...)

[hrgiger]

This is a thread continued from this thread: http://vbulletin.newtek.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=9110

Finished the body. Here's a basic untextured body shot. The only thing I'm not sure about at this point are the shoulders. I think they need tweaked a bit yet.

I didn't use a reference for the body so let me know what you think of the proportions most of all.

[cybernaut]

Very cool model!!!

C&C - Your right about the shoulder, something does look a bit off. I might try defining the deltoids a bit more, that will help to define the shoulder joint and possibly help to improve the models realism. The crease you have on the shirt does not seem to fold in the right direction, maybe angleing it out a bit will also aid in further defining the shoulder area. Another proportion issue I notice that you may want to address in the head. In short, it looks way too big, A simple scaling down should easily fix that. Hope this helps.

Cheer :)

[hrgiger]

Here's a shot with the hair...

[Mclaren]

Why does this remind me so much of Trinity?

[MarkJTaylor]

This is awesome. I can't believe I missed this.

Modelling is superb, those pants are excellent, and the render is simply to die for. I'll be keeping my eye on this one. Great work.

The only critique I have is that the shoulder / underarm area looks a little small. Her shoulders seem like they should be a little more rounded, and the armpit not so high up. Aside from that. Excellent work.

[hrgiger]

Thanks Mark.

I've already fixed the shoulder area. I had to rebuild the whole area because my polyflow wasn't working so well. I'll post an update when I can.

Not sure I like the hair yet, still undecided about that.

I started rigging her tonight. I'm sure eventually here I'll get around to some texturing work. Admittedly, my least favorite.

[lone]

it's hard to say for certain with her arms up, but it seems her shoulders aren't wide enough - makes her head look too big. other than that, looks great.

[hrgiger]

Yeah Lone, I've already fixed the shoulders (I had to rebuild them pretty much over again) and I've been slow to getting an update posted. I'll get around to it in the next few days. Thanks for your feedback.

[knuckles644]

The nose and the eyes are off...they make her look a little ugly...and we all know that Angelina Jolie is NOT ugly...

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid75/pa892e66f4b95596b9fd201fa6410214f/fb4d2100.jpg

Who could tell she's the daughter of Jon Voight?

[riki]

mmm I like girls with big lips.