No.. not another nude woman model...

[Dete]

Hi guys !
Here´s a model i started out yesterday, not finished yet .. no hands isn´t that freaky :D... just wanted to know what u think about it sofar... improvement tips is always welcome..

cheers,
.: Dete :.

[Dete]

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[MarkJTaylor]

Looks excellent so far! Tell me, how the heck do you do that nice glow on your renders. I'm still so new to lightwave, I'd love to learn all this stuff.

[Dete]

Hmm about that glow - there´s really nothing 2 it...
Surface editor > advanced tab > glow intensity (i had about 15%)
then you gotta go 2 the Image Process tad in Layout ( ctrl+F8 I think ).. check Enable Glow and adjust the Glow intensity and pixel radius..

[MarkJTaylor]

Excellent. Thank you very very much for the quick response. I'll try it now :)

And please, keep us updated on the process of your girl :)

[anieves]

a couple of suggestions:
1- the groove on the back of the neck right below the head is too prominent.
2- I think the dimples at the shoulder plates need to be revised.

[Knightmare22]

i'm not the authority on boobs.. (i'm AN authority, but not THE authority ;) ) but the curvature of the breasts, particularly along the bottem need some reworking.. they should a ppear to be a single fluid curve.. not sure how to say it, they just seem awkward.. it's looking great elsewhere though, keep up the good work and keep us posted..

[Dete]

thanks for the crits - Knightmare22 boobs fixed, nice to know that you are the master of boobs ;)

anieves - I´m on the back, the problem is that this is my first female model - It would be nice if anyone could post a nice female wireframe image - so I can get some ideas how 2 solve the back anatomy problem.. (psshh... long sentace)

well, I created a hand - crits & suggs !

cheers,

.: Dete :.

[Dave3D]

I think you got the body right, but the head seems to look a little alien like. just a thought...

Dave

[sire]

Right, the head looks strange. And the ears you added are a little tiny.