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[sanuZ]

This is my second peace of work that I've done in lightwave. Its a office/work scene,Tell what you think.

[riki]

Mmm Looks too clean and old-school 3D. You could push it heaps more.

[sanuZ]

I'm still new at this.Dont know all the functions, what can i add or improve?

[riki]

Trying adding some grime, edge detail, breaking up the uniform surfaces and avoid repeating textures that sort of thing.

[Dave3D]

aye, me this some improvement to the lighting will go a long way, try some radiodisty or Some area lights to get that softer shadow effect. Will up the render times a lot thou.... :(

Dave

[mega maniac]

is it me or is that table at a slant, it looks like it, aslo the room looks absolubtly massive, its either thats its too big or that there is just too little in it, also is that desk meant to be floating, it kinda looks that way, even if there is a leg, maybe making it visable could help.

[dblanky]

The vase seems to have a bit to much refraction, glass is 1.5 i think. and the floor seems way to reflective. also try a different camera angle. otherwise its pretty good!

[MorituriMax]

The plasma display on the wall needs to put out more light.. grin