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[Jason T]

Those of you who frequent LWG will have seen the Saturn V as I was building it, but I'm so proud of the finished model that I'd post an image here too!:)

Comments and Critisism always welcome!:)

[pauland]

The models look great. I think the viewpoint and lighting are a bit strange, I'd move the viewpoint, look at the lighting and maybe some of the textures (particularly the LEM, which also suffers a bit from sharp edges). I'm not quite fooled that they are models yet, though that was my first impression!

Great modelling though. Thanks for posting it.

Paul

[Jason T]

I'd noticed that the LEM is a little sharp around the edges, but the real thing looks exactly the same way. I'm probably do some microbeveling to take the sharpness off however.

I've had another try at the scene; the lighting has been changed, the caustics removed, camera angle changed, surfaces tweaked, etc.
I prefer this version to the original; the composition is a lot tidier, IMO.

[pauland]

That is looking so much better. The LEM looks great.

I'm not sure that I'm a fan of the jaunty angle. Have you tried a 'looking down' view?

Paul

[lasco]

I'm also disturbed by the angle of the camera,
not sure it adds the dynamism it's I guess supposed to.

And another little critic : this blur background
should be worked a bit more. Why not adding some
horizontal, vertical lines, quite light but that make
think af some architectural-ingeniered structure ?

Apart this : very good model and rendering.

[riki]

Great attention to detail. My only comments, it looks too clean and the overall composition/ or position of the camera doesn't work so well.

[lasco]

word for word agree with riki