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Krom
01-19-2008, 08:19 AM
Spent 15min on modelling and another 5 hours on surfacing. Didn't used nodes for very long time.. All materials are quite simple, only interesting detail - 3 surfaces usage (Glass, Tea, Air).
Rendered in FPrime

Exception
01-19-2008, 03:26 PM
Looks nice!
I think the tea and the brushed metal are well done.

Here are some suggestions:

- the background wall texture is really distractingly computer graphics...
- The wood texture on the table is too bright and too saturated. I'd turn down the saturation of the texture and reduce the diffuse
- Ambient light on? turn it off.
- A bit more AA would be nice. Would especially help out the brushed metal. Perhaps with a bit of oversampling, if you havn't got that already
- Perhaps turn the diffuse of the brushed metal down a bit

cheers!

Krom
01-19-2008, 04:52 PM
I guess I'll leave it as is, since it's Finished works section ;)

Thanks for your reply, it's always nice to see constructive critics. I will use your advice in next works :)