Car

[si_kick]

Im a newbie teaching myself lightwave and i thought id post my latest model ive made. Its my second car (my first one sucked) but id just like to hear what u think and how i can improve it, thanks

PS: its a Lexus IS 200 if u hadnt figured it out yet

[riki]

I know I'm stating the obvious, but the lighting is really blowing out, you need to reign it in. The modeling looks good, some strange pinching in the rear end.

[chrisisbacky2k]

looks pretty cool,

it would be nice of you could model a pretty simple inside and then have the windows tinted with a little trans;)

[Doran]

I'd hate to go over a speed bump in that.

:)

[Schwing]

Nice car so far. Your tire to fender wall clearance looks way too tight. For a car that has a suspension that is. The style of your rear wing looks out of place with the car's style. Kind of clashy; the looks don't flow to me. But that may be the effect you're looking for. Tone down your lighting and pop us some more shots.

[Carbon71]

That render is so blown out (so much completely white) that it's hard to see the detail. Can you give us a better exposure? Remember if you are using "Image Viewer FP" as your render display, you can then adjust the white point and thus bring some detail back into view. This can save some re-render time.

[si_kick]

yeah i know about the light i ddint mean to make the light that bright ill post a re render soon, the spoilers supposed to look like what do u mean it looks "clashy", ill try post that pic sometime soon;)

[paulgrunt]

I think your model is DOPE! I'm wondering if you would like to contribute it or any other car modeling you've done for placement into some car show fliers I'm creating for 4 North American import car shows... I'm looking for modelers to contribute to our promotional materials. Contact me if you interested. Keep up the good work.

peace.