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artecnl
08-04-2005, 11:52 PM
Hi guys, this is my new image, an interior, rendered with Fprime, i want to know your critics, i hope you like it :D
ravantra
08-05-2005, 09:59 AM
I like the out of scale objects. The light for instance is huge compared to the pictures on the wall and the couch. The "dresser" looks like it could hold a body it is much bigger than the couch....very surreal. Like you say to criticize is easy to make art difficult.
artecnl
08-05-2005, 02:54 PM
Hi, yes, everyone here in my house tell me that, fix the scale, i think the lamp, and the pen and pencil are too big, i need to do a better work in the scales.

Cheers,
kfj001
08-05-2005, 04:47 PM
Well, the modeling seems spot on, nice detail everywhere. Same goes for the texturing.

Looks quite photorealistic, if I do say so.

That being said; I think the decor is hideous. But if that's what you want your room to look like, who am I to criticze :hey:
artecnl
08-05-2005, 06:41 PM
hi, about the decoration, maybe, yes you are right, but, is about the colors?, or, the furniture?, it will be good if you tell me what details you see wrong, iŽll appreciate your comments, :D im a begginer, :D
kfj001
08-05-2005, 07:54 PM
hi, about the decoration, maybe, yes you are right, but, is about the colors?, or, the furniture?, it will be good if you tell me what details you see wrong, iŽll appreciate your comments, :D im a begginer, :D

It's the colors, really. Most of the walls are touched with a blue aura either from the Windows or the windowframes (purple-ish,) and one of your pictureframes is blue, but the walls themselves are blood red.

Now, this is entirely a decoration preference. If you want red walls, you've done a good job making them. Your models are spot-on, and the textures are perfect.
artecnl
08-06-2005, 12:58 AM
due to the comments about the objets scale, i did a new arrangement in that area, i hoepe that's fine, i wanna hear your comments, thankŽs
cheers. :D
Tiger
08-06-2005, 03:38 PM
That is a huge pen compared to the guitar.
Otherwise...nice!
Jim_C
08-06-2005, 03:55 PM
Theres a red house over yonder...

I dig the picture in the yellow frame.

The whole thing has a surreal Dali feel to it...... kinda
Or maybe it's the 7 1/2 floor...
artecnl
08-07-2005, 01:32 PM
Hi, yes about the pen, its a liŽll bit big, and Jim_C about your comment, is about the picture in the yellow frame? well, i see you later thanks for your comments :D cheers.