Character::Demon

[Angel]

Here´s a Demon/gargoyle type of character i´m currently working on, still lots to do but i will be updating it...
http://webs.ono.com/koroko/sc5.jpg
http://webs.ono.com/koroko/sc1.jpg
http://webs.ono.com/koroko/sc2.jpg
http://webs.ono.com/koroko/sc3.jpg
http://webs.ono.com/koroko/sc4.jpg



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angel

[Angel]

lil´update

I know this is very much work in progress, but 60 views no repys... :\



http://webs.ono.com/usr002/Koroko/sc7.jpg



I´ll keep updating...

I post it here, so u guys could suggest things while i´m in the middle of it, so i can add them...come´n

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angel

[pixelranger]

I like it a lot, Angel! Especially his face. But there is something wrong with his proportions (especially around his neck) and he's got a very long waist. Try shortening his waist and bring forth his head a little.
I also really like the ribs.

Keep the updates comin'!! :)

[groodwanderer]

i would say this is a good start but if you want it to be a demon just adding horns won't do the trick. I would like to see you really tweak out his skull or facial structure. Don't get me wrong this is some great modeling. It just isn't a demon. So you will get responses like pixelranger's saying this is off or that isn't the right length or size. Because what he see's is what I see. A human with horns.

He looks of the muscular type so really beef out his chest maybe give him some monkey arms. Horns coming out of his shoulders, or back is always cool.

I don't want you to take these comments the wrong way. The modeling is excellent :cool: and i am very jealous of your ability. But i would either lose the horns and finish modelling a human or really tweak this guy out and make the demon char.:D

[Jake]

Sorry, I don't know why but I just see little boxes with x in them. No pics.

[oxyg3n]

Yeah me too,

I looked at this thread earlier and didnt see pictures then too. Only the little boxes with the X.

[Cassanovastein]

Listen to Groo. I think he has a point, Angel.
But I have to say - your musculature and facial features are excellent. Just make those horns seem like they are a functional part of the skull and maybe de-humanize the facial features a liitle more.
Really great so far.

[jin'a]

the body is not in proportion to the head, i think the neck and head are too large for the body, and vice versa. But not bad, how about making him more like the horned reaper from dungeon keepers?! He looks cool!

[Angel]

Hi guys, thanks for replys & suggestions...

The other day the server where i storage it was down, thats why...normally works fine, but every now and then...


Have retouched some proportions, especially the waist and neck, as pixelranger nicely pointed...


About Groo´s sugestions, appreciate them, but well, i´m not really sure, my idea was for human anatomy almost all the way, but u guys have a point here, integration between demon-like features and human ones need some adjustment, the horns now are just like not belonging right there, i know, there´re parts i´m not completely sure how i want them, so i move along with others....about touching the face, well, i´m sure that the part where the horns grow, and all the upper and back part of the skull will be little different, but guys, i wont touch the face, i really love how it tourned out, well maybe a little, but not much... :)

My idea about the anatomy of this guy its not really clear, i know how i dont want it to be, for instance, not anatomically perfect, like an ideal body, thats why i started with the waist that way, like too elongated and little convex, i want to have this minor irregularities to give hims some personallity, but something really subtle....

Here goes a little update, havent done bigger image cause there´s not much to see...just so u guys see the progress...

Legs & arms are in the middle of the battle...

http://webs.ono.com/usr002/Koroko/sc8.jpg


thanks again for suggestions...


updating soon!


See ya


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angel

[groodwanderer]

well it is your character so you can do whatever you want with it. I am just saying it doesn't look like a demon. Maybe he is a half breed or something.:rolleyes: I don't know, I would say if you like the face then good finish, the model with that face. But when you are done and want it to look more demonish, really mess it up. You never know you might stumble onto something you like.

Your are of course going to mess with the symmetry once you are finished right? Just in case you weren't thinking of doing that, I would strongly suggest it. He looks to proportioned to be real.

Just some of my personal opinions.

[Hiraghm]

When you only had the upper part of the body, it looked like an elemental from Everquest