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nodger
04-17-2003, 06:04 PM
This is my first ever post on this forum, although I've been a regular visitor for nearly a year. Anyway, heres an image Í did a while back....id just like a bit of CC... Its a high-rise apartment block i modeled

Capel
04-17-2003, 07:30 PM
you might want to bevel the edges so they're not so.... perfect, i guess. Are you going to texture it?

riki
04-17-2003, 07:49 PM
It's a bit hard to look at from this angle. Also try breaking up the surface texture a bit.

Rory_L
04-17-2003, 08:57 PM
Ow! I`m getting a crick in the neck looking at this! :D

What`s this for? Usually you`d want a building to look a little more lived in than this: how about some washing dring on a few balconies. Potted plants trailing down might be nice too.

R

banshee
04-18-2003, 05:24 AM
Good foundation so far. Needs some texturing, weather, diffusing etc... Maybe break it up with some additional architectural elements. Oh, please do a little more compressing with the jpeg. You can still get a good compromise of quality (even though we hate compresing) without a huge file size. 840kb is a tad much.

lunarcamel
04-18-2003, 01:34 PM
How do you know where I live? ;)

A good sky backround/image that has the correct perspective would also help this a bit.