Crit' please...

[funkeline]

I'm a bit apprehensive about posting this, since seeing The Rippers contribution!

But anyway, it's my first attempt at a head, so I thought I might as well.

Textures = still WIP
Eyes = I'm really not happy with.

the chin's ok though!

[mgreenway]

Looking good.
Is the bridge of the nose a little two wide?
Could the way the ears meet the head be improved?
There is something a little spooky with the eye yet.
This is going to turn out real good, I Like it.:)

[pierre]

Hello

the model seems quite good to me, but I see the very together eyes and a little flat. the ear this good but you must improve the union of the face and ear.
Luck a greeting

Pierre bixquert

[funkeline]

thanks for the input...

you're right, the ear looks "tagged on" !!!

and perhaps the eyes a little too big?

also the face is completely symmetrical, I'll need to adjust this.

any tips for getting the eyes more realistic, anyone?

[pierre]

hello the eyes I see a little them great, where the partition begins the nose is too high deberia to be but low and a little but fine.
I send your drawing to you, that I have changed I hope that does not bother to you. I have drawn an example so that you see the changes do

Luck a greeting

Pierre bixquert

[funkeline]

thanks for that pierre!

I'll take your observations into consideration.

I think I'll give the modelling of the face a rest for now, and concentrate on the eye-balls. They're bothering me so much at the moment, I can't seem to focus on anything other than them! :rolleyes:

eye research!
eye research!!
eye research!!!

[funkeline]

btw..

these are the reference photos that I (roughly) based the model on...

(in case any body cared!!)

he's a colleague from work (can you tell he's from Wales?!!)

[funkeline]

another...

[groodwanderer]

the eye sockets don't appear to be deep enough. It looks like you could do a bit of tweaking on the lower lid as well.