Adel Cortez (Female Nude)

[artmarci]

Hi guys its been a while and its the same rule from this "old" 0.1 model i started 1/2 jear ago...
Wel who cant still remember it i have the old Adel attached to the post so you guys canremember it heh:D

Anyway's the char adel is now like a 2.5 upgrade know...i now i am still waaay back from finish coss this model need some serieus retouching and remodelling to look even more realistic but slowly i am getting there...and who knows?regenarete models from it? Thats the way steven Giesler did it for his Aki Ross Char:)

Anyway can you give me some direktions and critics so i know where my aim is supposed to be?

Like how to get a better skin like the detail you saw in Flight of the Osiris "Due" "Thadius".(those dots or bubble in the skin was ****ing realistic)

Or body tips i am allready working on better hands ,feet and breasts..what needs more retouching and modeling?TY very much :)



PS i had some testing and pulling with diffrents size of hair with Sasquatch and with that Low Poly Hair tut what i dig up a while a go heh dont be confused by it And i have updated the feet a little in that last pic :cool:

[lardbros]

Not too bad! But my... does she have one mother f***er of an arse?!!! Thats just one thing, that in my opinion, is waaaay to huge!

Also in the hips department, unless u like ur women pear-shaped, slim the hips down too, to pretty much shoulder width. Ummm, otherwise its a good job. Oh and the breasts are kinda odd in a way. If u want her to have not-so-good boobs then they probly okay, but the underneath of them carries on too far up if you ask me! (if that makes sense?)

Don't mean to crit too much, just those changes would alter her to my taste! :D

I like the hair alot in the second pic...great!

[artmarci]

hehe Lardbros i laught 5 min at the first line you wrote :D
Yes she got a big motherF***king ars but then again i c many ars doing daytime and some off them are pretty much like that :D...

But will change it if it realy doesnt suitse my Char
O yes the hips i noticed it to ...i think it happend acedently (<---or how you may write it)when i did some retouching on the model then it moved a little with it i think...
If you look close at my second last pics you will noticed the diffrents...wel i will change that...

yeah those breasth are def not the best part from it ...that realy is going to change he...
wel like i sayd i am doing some seriues retouching with it ...keep you guys posted offcourse

Lardbros thx for your responce
Any other pointers guys?
still waithing for some answer :)hehe

cya

[artmarci]

just wondering does anyone have some more idea's for me...Not that i am greedy for critics but....I looking for something to aim...i am already working on lard bros ideas...wel but that is a standard retouching isue i think ..just looking for some new ideas what i can try out on my char while i am at it heh...still looking for some answer in some questions...

o well if they dont i know
what to do...update my Char :)

cya Artmarqy (btw can i update my name coss artmarci was a name that i used way back)

and thanks for reading

[The_Eye]

Big improvement from the first attempt, which is kind of like a blow-up doll. This one's much better.

The hands are too small and the feet too big.

Study proportions at fineart.sk

[artmarci]

heh working on the:
hands better arms (muscle seperations)smaller hips, better seperation from the muscle on the back and shoulder and i think i have to make some seperation from the bone and flesh on the ribcage lvl...
heh even a smaller ars and some natural looking breasth...

the face you seen was my first face i ever created using Dan ablan inside lightwave 7 book (holla to dan and his crew)...so that will offcourse be updated to :)


ok will be posting ya..i dig up some texture tut from my buddie hrgigger what i lost way back he explained to me how you can make a better skin

And i dig up the rippers pin up file in how to make more "life like"reflection eyes


So like someone so delicly put in words: So many polys so little time :D
(o i will make time for this char..put to many effort in modeling the right way to lose it know hehe)

Will keep you guys updated!

[The_Eye]

...the rippers pin up file in how to make more "life like"reflection eyes

What's that? Is that online somewhere? Could you give the link?

[artmarci]

urrr for the eyes the ripper had did to say in his char model:

http://vbulletin.newtek.com/showthread.php?p=163054#post163054

and hrgiggers take on human skin texturing was this:

http://vbulletin.newtek.com/showthread.php?t=679


But i dig in to the net offcourse to find some real Pro's and Amateurs discussing this subject like CG Talk :

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=145071

and i saw the rippers head flying by again in this CGtalk discussing a little about the skin shading isue :


http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=46897&page=1&pp=15


And by error and mistake i stumbled on this tut by Stephen Stahberg:


http://www.optidigit.com/stevens/shadetut.html



And true all the links it was CGtalk links what guided me here again to find out there is maybe a skin shader plugin in newtek forums her self:D...made by Lynx3d:

http://vbulletin.newtek.com/archive/index.php/t-4601.html

I allready asked him if he can send it again it seems the link is down somehow
Dont know what it does exactly. ...but looking forward to give it a try though heh

And offcourse i have my Inside Lightwave 7 book on this matter in every step off the way to :

Chapter 10 Organic Modeling...after you build the head go to page 506


So like i sayd :so many poly's so little time heh :D

[The_Eye]

Oh. I thought Ripper had something specific.

You should focus on modeling. Thinking about texturing at this stage is really putting the carriage before the horse, running before learning to walk, uh... I'm out of cliches.

[artmarci]

Urrr...i am doing that just showing you some links you maybe need or something.
Always helpfull