Character: Julie

[artstorm]

Working on my new character, Julie.

I'm starting to get pretty happy with the head, but I'd appreciate all kinds of feedback.
http://www.artstorm.net/temp/forum/julie_wip1.jpg
Oh, and the final will end up in greyscale as well.

Looking forward to get some hints and suggestions from fresher eyes than mine! :)

[bobakabob]

Looks good, though the eyes are very glazed and 'alien' looking. Post some more angles so we can get a closer look.

[adrian]

No crits on the modelling, but as already mentioned the eyes need a little tweaking. My first impression was that it makes her look a little psychopathic.

Adrian.

[smok3]

she is really nice,

i dont think the problem is with the eyes, but more with how they are lit, the white spots (exactly) in the middle are used for psiho effect (in movies)...

[artstorm]

Thanks for your comments. Much appreciated. I've been doing a couple of updates to her face/head. Here is a couple of more angles, and a wire.

Changes from the first picture, obviously improved the hair quite a bit, adjusted the chin, nose and mouth and did some adjustments with the eyes.

More comments and critiques are very welcome. :)

[artmarci]

Nice Face and lighting setup there :)eyes realy come out

[Sastira]

Her nose seems somewhat mannish, and her neck seems to long. That is just my opinion, of course.

Overall it is very nice. :)

[artstorm]

Thanks for your comments. I thought about the nose as well, and did round it off to soften it up a bit after I posted the images above.

Havn't though about the neck though. Here's a full body render of her, might be easier to see then. Would love comments on the full body, as well as further if the neck seems to long here as well?

Just in case, I inserted a mild nudity disclaimer for the full body render in the thread's subject, so nobody should get offended.

[artmarci]

Well..i am doing some modeling on my char myself but,,,
if its for any use my 2 cents:

The breasts looks a little flattend and i need to c some more knee detailes,
and maybe some muscle in legs...

o and i think the head should be a little bigger it looks a little small somehow...

in overal a head is in many times a little bigger in proportions compare with the body..if it is a normal body that is and not some body builder heh...wel the neck is ok i think...

ok that was my list of crits looking forward for more pics
take it from me..Ya Doing Great! just some retouching :)

[artstorm]

ArtMarci: Thanks for all your comments and suggestions. I do appreciate it! Will get to improving the body next. And try to define some parts better. Especially the legs.

I've been refining her head in the meantime, so now I finally start to get happy with it. I've pulled around some points in most areas of the face, and also resculpted her hairstyle a bit.