first animation

[gazmon]

I've been playing with Lightwave for a while and thought its time to get some opinions from you guys n gals. This is my first near complete animation so would like to know what you think.
PS: I'm not a script writer so please dont comment on the quality of the story!!! There is sound on the original but it was a hefty size so I took it off for the web!
cheers
Gaz
http://members.madasafish.com/~garymartin/video.html

[Cageman]

Really good executing of this short movie. Good idea! The things that really got my attention are those small fhishes swiming around...really, really good motion on those!

I don´t know about some of the character motions, they look little stiff.

Be sure to let us know when and where to find a high-res edit of this movie! :)

[gazmon]

thanks for the reply cageman- I was nervous to hear what people would say as its my first post! I agree the characters movements are stiff, its my first attempt at rigging a full character thats been usable though! You should ahve seen the first!! lol
I'll post a higher quality version with (bad) sound effects as soon as I can, I was just worried about peoples connection speed.
many thanks
Gaz :)