Teaser Ad for my First Film

[LeonardWho]

What do you think Dose it Pique your intrest? C&C wellcome and incouraged.
Leonard

[mips]

well, I imagine that this very nice and smilling green guy will be very mean and bad in your movie ;)

[LeonardWho]

Truth be told the Smiley face isn't a character in the in the Film, Just a Glass contaner filled with...........

[kief]

i would not put "you'll find out why." it seems implied and adds too much text to that part of the image at that text size. if it is possible to bring down the noise and make the image smoother and cleaner that would, i think, help it look less cluttered. other than that lookin' good

kief

[Capel]

Ummmmm..... not really interesting at all.... just kind of weird. It's just a smiley face ball lookin' thing. And it doesn't give ANY idea of what your "film" is gonna' be about. We should have SOME idea from the ad, at least, or we'll just forget that you're even making it.

[Hervé]

so intense , I've almost wet myself....

the "find out" why or who or where or how seams to be sooooo out of date.... sorry...

[LeonardWho]

wow you guys are brutal. I asked for C&C not useless sarcasm. Also it's called a Teaser Ad for a Reason If it were a Trailer Ad then you'd be seeing a lot more then just a container of SMILEY.

[Capel]

Dude, if you can't take constructive criticism, you might want to mention it in your post. Otherwise we're under the impression that we should be honest in our opinions, and constructive in our advice... which is exactly what i was. If you think that I was brutal, then good luck in this industry.