AN office interior,(Univ project)

[SpeedMetal]

Hi, this is my first post in Newtek discussion forum
hope some feedback from all the masters here

ok at first,I start it from LAMP...

this is a table lamp
I`ve done this model 2 days ago, but just finished the lighting and texturing yesterday...

[SpeedMetal]

this is rendered version

[SpeedMetal]

whooops...^^
I got wrong image,
okay this is the rendered version,
I used blur in refraction, HDRI, and transparency...

[astro-sanchez]

good, you should pull the camera back to show all of the light.

[SpeedMetal]

chair is cominggggg
how does it look??

umm yep, it still dont have any textures yet, I planned to add some UV, this will be my first UV experiment hehe...

[adrian]

Nice modelling and surfacing. As far as the lamp, I agree with the above comment, it would be nice to see all of it.

I especially like the chair.

Adrian.

[daveythegravy73]

Hi there,

I kind of like the tight camera angle. Less conventional. Althou it would be nice to also see a render of the whole lamp.

Best Wishes

daveythegravy

[SpeedMetal]

hi! a little update!!

I finished the table with UV map, (the table reference is same like this thing, a simple table)

maybe the edge is too smooth,I ll try to fix it later... :)

[Hiraghm]

Looks very good...

On the lamp base, you might want to turn your diffuse down some. It looks like you have it at 100%

You might also, on all of your surfaces, set the colored highlights to 30 percent or so, and on the lampshade, set the color filter to about 30%.

Just a thought.

[Stewpot]

Hi speedmetal,

That wood grain on the desk seems to make it look a little disproportionate, kinda toyish. I think it could do with scaling down a little.

[adrian]

I think the desk corner is way too smooth - unlike any desk I've ever seen. Mind you, the advantage of a desk like that is it would be very difficult to cut yourself if you slipped and hit your head on the side!!

I think the texturing on the table is a little too uniform as well as looking a little big.

Adrian.

[SpeedMetal]

wheww thx for the comment, my friends also said that way too smooth, yeah, think I got drunk too much with subdivision things...
(I subdivied 95 % of my recent model)

I`ll try to fix it later

[SpeedMetal]

a little update!

working with sofa but untextured yet

[adrian]

Yep, love that sofa! What technique did you use to model that?

Did you render with radiosity to get the soft shadow, or just normal lighting with soft shadows?

Adrian.

[SpeedMetal]

normal raodiosity, thats it

[SpeedMetal]

really2 need help on tree
do u have any suggestion, where is the best tutorial to make a tree pot?