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giacob
07-13-2009, 03:18 PM
a small interior
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1194/camera8.jpg
some small update with others pov
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7590/camera15filtered.jpg


http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7476/camera26nnnnnnnnnnnnnnf.jpg

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1556/camera28klklklklklklklf.jpg

previus are all in maxwell
last in rendered witt lw engine
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2143/gggggjhjhjhjh.jpg
By giacob (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/giacob) at 2009-07-13











By giacob at 2009-07-13

Iain
07-14-2009, 03:46 AM
The lighting and composition look great but some materials are letting it down.

Also, the scale of the art objects and candles (do you need to include them?) on the island unit looks off.

Good stuff though :)

giacob
07-14-2009, 05:34 AM
jain, could u point out wich material are off and what is wrong about them?
so i can improve them thanks

Iain
07-14-2009, 12:03 PM
The ones that stood out to me were the sliding door metal, the chair fabric, the vase and candles and the flooring (in some renders).

To be honest it could be down to jpeg compression as the images have a lot of artifacts (I assume due to compression) but the other materials just look to be of higher quality.

revengeofmonty
07-14-2009, 12:45 PM
First off, gorgeous stuff. Very nice.

There appears to be a fair bit of noise in the Maxwell renders, but as Iain says, that could be jpeg artifacting.

I think the oblong lights in the top render look odd, but I could be just being picky. They seem very hot for such a small, flat light. The gas rings look a little off as well.

But overall, very nice!!